Liam Doran Spring challenge entry

ABWA hardcore title match - best of three falls 1st Hardcore 2nd ladder 3rd lastman standing match

part 1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SnQhPBAudQI
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part 2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zFDyu3USuxs&feature=related
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part 3
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KKtXOtGxWL0&feature=related
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Sorry that i havent watched this, but ive been real busy lately. Ill do it ASAP When i got time which is sometime tomorrow.

I watched and left my comments on youtube!

Absolution wrote:

I watched and left my comments on youtube!

yea i saw them.... and yes losing turns people phyco in abwa lol!

Liam 'The llama' Doran wrote:

Absolution wrote:

I watched and left my comments on youtube!

yea i saw them.... and yes losing turns people phyco in abwa lol!

Well its just not losing it is the harassment of the whole fed after you lose! lol, talking about kicking a man while he is down!

lol there just jelous cose im the greatest wrestler in abwa .... na its all will be reviled why i go nuts next week!

Okay feedback:

- LoL, the commentary
- You guys should start with a lockup sometimes :L
- Back suplex were okay, but the trampoline made it look lame
- Stiff up those kicks and punches
- "Liam has a deadly stick of stickiness" xD....
- DDT was okay... Bump it, dont just roll over
- If you are gonna hit him with a stick, then hit him hard
- Senton was strange, he has to hit you with his upper back
- WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAy to slow count from the ref
- Leg drop thing couldve been good if you didnt bounce up again
- Bulldog was nice
- Connect hits and kicks
- Highrise was cool
- Bat stuff was hillarous
- Cool Samoan Drop but wheres the ref?
- Submission holds were cool, just dont do to many after eachother, like if your passed out you cant just get him into your submission and make he tap, that makes no sense.
- More height on the splash
- The dive was kinda lame, like ive said: If you are going to do a spot do it good, or dont do it at all
- Stiff up the backbreaker, he can take that
- Into the wall thingy was good
- You dont stay down from a submission hold unless your "passed out"
- "The match is over" xD
- Hit with the belt was good
- Bulldog... again...
- Haha, the trow
- IF you are going to do a spot, do it real (The splash onto the ladder)
- Neckbreaker were okay...
- Plywood into the ring... Plywood out of the ring...?
- Kick was stiff
- Ankle Lock shouldve been used more strengt at, make it look like he wants you to get hurt
- "What is this company called?" xD!?
- You honestly didnt need that missing spot kick thing
- The guy you were wrasslin needs to bump, especially the table spot, it just didnt seem right
- The diving clothesline were okay
- BUT defo not good enough to lose from... :/
- A guy that only loses dosnt get a title shot : P
- Promo was good, why didnt he enter the kayfabe challlenge?
- BRITISH ENGLISH FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Overall: I enjoyed this match but you need improvement. The most important thing you need to do is to stop hitting people with sticks and stuff, and do more chaining, tecnical moves and stuff like that. Chaining is the most important. Also think about real life fights and how much you can handle in real life when it comess to punches, moves etc... Then Stiffen up everything and ABWA would be much better.
Commentary were hillarous but great!
Good luck Bro

Thanks 4 the feedback and i can back myself up 4 some of the things on there.... the plywood thing in and out of the ring it was serpost to stay outside the ring 4 the ending but we kinda forgot in the heat of the momment.... the closeline at the end once again was a fuck up with the plywood the orignal ending was that he was ganna clime the ladder a do a missle dropkick onto me and i was ganna go through the table and well he stacked it through the table so that failed lol so once he did that i just thought and fuck it im getting bit tired so i just didnt get up lol.... but thanks 4 the comments and ill defo try n imporve in the futrue!

p.s. the ref who we was using isnt use to reffing i think that was his first match and i started attacking halfway through the match because of it lol