Federations : RCW, ICW, ABW Posts : 855 Join date : 2010-01-24 Age : 34 Location : De Pere, WI
Subject: My First Ring Match Sun Mar 14, 2010 5:34 pm
Feedback for each Renegade and myself would be appreciated.
Tony Deppen Cooler than John Cena
Posts : 60 Join date : 2010-01-27
Subject: Re: My First Ring Match Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:45 pm
Is this a try uot pro match or something?
First off when you wrestle in a wrestling ring, get wrestlines shoes looks better.
For that lock up shawn, you looked like you walked in tied up to an invisble guy go in with power n tie up n keep your head up.
Tell that dude to do his hip tosses from the other side, but glad to see you still posted off it.
Rexxs tie up, keep your head up and cup the back of his head with youer left hand n put your right hand insdie his bicep area, and when he threw you back he should've made it more powerful like lean back n then launch you.
the other guys tie up was horrible, why jump into it like that?
Rexx that suplex you took hook your arm around hsi head so you don't get hurt.
You ugys need to work on your ring placemenet, most moves unless you have a purpose for them shoudl be towards teh middle of the ring.
take your time on those chops shawn, make them look viscious, and hit them like slightly above where their titties meet.
Rexx looks like you snad bagged that atomic drop, jump up high make it look good.
when you caught him for the cross body you looked like y ou were just waiitn for him should've just took it slowly don't act like you know he is comign.
Irish whips, push him into the ropes first then launch him off and when you push him off make sure you push your right hand off his back to make it look like you are pushin him away.
and please don't do clotheslines you're too small.
rexx work on your kicks your feet are turning in sideways, and there should've been a better ste up for teh sto and do it from the right side not the left.
Never pick him up like you are helpion him up, pick him up by the head, grab hi turn him into you.
when you stomp them, make it look like you're stompin both feet but of course make one contact n make the other one hit off the mat to make some noise, wrestling is all bout illusions makin ppl think its crazy.
Take your time with runnin the ropes you looked like you were tryin to to hard, take some steps then turn into the ropes and spring yourself off, it looked like you wre stoppin yourself from running the ropes.
and shawn do your clotheslines better, they look weak, bend your elbow n that to mkae a small v n make it look like you want to take their head off!
Ok fuck these other guys I am goin to focus on you two.
Rex for drop downs, don't do them first and dont do them so far away, do a leap frog firs tthen drop down, try to get as clsoe to them as possible cause the point of a drop down is to give the illusion that you will trip them.
WAs any of this really planned, you kind of just walked into that hiptoss again, try to jup up high for hiptosses makes um look good.
I don't even know if you are pals with these guys so I don't know if I should leave feedback to them, but anyways that drag n that looked like crap.
I am goin to admit I am not goin to watch the last 5 mins of it, cause its pretty boring so far, it's a 4 way try to incorprate each other into things, make it look good, next time you guys are in teh ring try to keep stuff in the middle of teh ring make shit look good n make the effects make ppl believe you are kickin ass.
Shawn Jovi Boss at being awesome
Federations : RCW, ICW, ABW Posts : 855 Join date : 2010-01-24 Age : 34 Location : De Pere, WI
Subject: Re: My First Ring Match Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:55 am
Thanks tony. This really isn't even a pro fed as far as I know haha. It's more like yarding in a ring lol
The two guys in UWA tried planning out the match with us but they did it in the most confusing way possible. Plus, I'm not used to fully planning things out so it was weird for me haha
I'll take some notes down and work on what I need to do for CCW and next months show for sure
Liam 'The llama' Doran Woah!!! You're half way there!!!
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Subject: Re: My First Ring Match Mon Mar 15, 2010 10:47 am
Big Bossman Selby wrote:
Thanks tony. This really isn't even a pro fed as far as I know haha. It's more like yarding in a ring lol
The two guys in UWA tried planning out the match with us but they did it in the most confusing way possible. Plus, I'm not used to fully planning things out so it was weird for me haha
I'll take some notes down and work on what I need to do for CCW and next months show for sure
Subject: Re: My First Ring Match Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:00 pm
try planning out small things first, then progress your way to bigger an more complex spots, it makes things look better.
Shawn Jovi Boss at being awesome
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Subject: Re: My First Ring Match Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:40 pm
alright sounds good
Tony Deppen Cooler than John Cena
Posts : 60 Join date : 2010-01-27
Subject: Re: My First Ring Match Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:11 pm
Like here is a some examples:
Go for clothesline weave through(which means hook his arm with your left) then pull down for the ddt like teh rock use to do.
n make it if you are the heel ake you have majority of the heat on the face, n make hope spots up for teh face, make him look like he is staging a come back hten boom heel cuts him off.
Shawn Jovi Boss at being awesome
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Subject: Re: My First Ring Match Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:30 pm
alright cool thanks. I know Rex Renegade and I are gonna face off at the RCW's third anniversary show in a few weeks and I plan on doing story telling and planning out a good amount of that match.
Tony Deppen Cooler than John Cena
Posts : 60 Join date : 2010-01-27
Subject: Re: My First Ring Match Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:45 pm
Good, I expect to see that media bitch!
Your selling needs to be a little bit better also, like someone hits you be and scream like a little bitch or just be like awehH!
Shawn Jovi Boss at being awesome
Federations : RCW, ICW, ABW Posts : 855 Join date : 2010-01-24 Age : 34 Location : De Pere, WI
Subject: Re: My First Ring Match Tue Mar 16, 2010 10:59 am
you will see the media lol. Hopefully it won't be in a park this time. I'm trying to get my old wrestling location back for one day only. Whether it works or not is the question though =/